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Pacing: The Invisible Engine

  • Saturday, March 07, 2026
  • 12:30 PM - 2:30 PM
  • The Mizell Center, 480 S Sunrise Way, Palm Springs, CA 92262

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  • Non-Members pay $155 for each Insider Workshop. Please note that if you choose to join the Guild before registering for this event you will pay a $75 Membership fee, and then the Member rate of $80 for the event—the same $155 total, but you’ll then gain all the benefits of membership in the Guild (including the Membership rate of $80 at any future Workshop).
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Announcing our next In-Person Workshop

Pacing: The Invisible Engine
Dete Meserve


Dete Meserve is a bestselling novelist and award-winning film and television producer. Her latest novel, The Memory Collectors—about four people who get the chance to spend one hour in their past—is an Amazon bestseller and Goodreads Choice Award nominee, currently in development as a TV series with Meserve as showrunner. She adapted her novel Good Sam into a Netflix film, which she also produced. She is also the author of Perfectly Good Crime, The Good Stranger, and The Space Between.


Presentation Overview:

Pacing is what keeps readers turning pages—but it's not about speed. It's about controlling their experience of time, tension, and momentum. In this workshop, bestselling novelist Dete Meserve breaks down pacing techniques at the sentence, scene, and structural level, with examples from her novel The Memory Collectors and other works. You'll leave with practical tools to make your book unputdownable.

Takeaways:

  1. Uncover the kind of pacing that keeps readers interested.
  2. Discuss ways to control the reader's experience, tension, and momentum.
  3. Explore techniques to keep the pacing at the sentence, scene, and structural levels.
  4. Review writing examples from Dete Meserve’s bestselling novel

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To receive a full refund minus a $25 cancellation processing fee, attendees must cancel their registration 5 days before the event. No refunds will be given after that time. To cancel your registration, go to palmspringswritersguild.org and click on the blue icon at the top right of any page. Enter user name and password and click "LOG IN". On the next screen click "My event registrations". Select event and cancel registration. 

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Meeting begins at 12:30 p.m. and ends at 2:30 p.m. 

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Event Contact: Dak Kopec

Email: DakKopec@mac.com